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20 nov 2018
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
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Dear Ms.Sally
I received your e-mail about "delivery charge increase".
Could you tell me why delivery charge is going to be increased?
I'd like to point out that I want you to tell me the change of charge earlier.
I'm not ready for paying the increased charge.
In addition, because a newspaper which I received yesterday was wet, I was very uncomfortable to read it.
Best regards,
Masa
Please check this e-mail for TOEIC!
Dear Ms.Sally
I received your e-mail about "delivery charge increase".
Could you tell me why delivery charge is going to be increased?
I'd like to point out that I want you to tell me the change of charge earlier.
I'm not ready for paying the increased charge.
In addition, because a newspaper which I received yesterday was wet, I was very uncomfortable to read it.
Best regards,
Masa
Dear Ms.Sally
I received your e-mail about "delivery charge increase".
Could you tell me why delivery charge is going to be increased?
I'd like to point out that I want you to tell me the change of charge earlier.
I'm not ready for paying the increased charge.
In addition, because a newspaper which I received yesterday was wet, I was very uncomfortable to read it.
Best regards,
Masa
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- Japonês
- Polaco
- Inglês (EUA) Quase Fluente
- Alemão Quase Fluente
@masango55
second sentence:
I’d like to point out that i asked about this previously but didn’t get any answer. (or if you wanted to say that you requested to be notified earlier- i requested / our agreement states that i was to be notified in advance)
(...) i was very uncomfortable to read it. It’s ok though it would be better, for me, to have it more formal (ex. Additionally, yesterday’s newspaper was delivered wet, which made it unreadable/uncomfortable to read)
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- Japonês
I’d like to point out that i asked about this previously but didn’t get any answer. (or if you wanted to say that you requested to be notified earlier- i requested / our agreement states that i was to be notified in advance)
Please tell me why I should say so.
Are there some misses in my sentence?
Thanks for your answer!
Please tell me why I should say so.
Are there some misses in my sentence?
Thanks for your answer!
- Polaco
- Inglês (EUA) Quase Fluente
- Alemão Quase Fluente
@masango55 it sounds quite rude ;) and point out usually goes with past tense, or present perfect like
“i’d like to point out that i have made everything you asked me to do”
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