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Hence, more significantly, an appeal to your friend to waive the smartphone aside but reconnect the communication with each other dose really make sense.
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Thanks. soa natural?
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Thanks. soa natural?
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"To tackle this it is necessary to put limits on time spent using a smartphone and to stay away from mindless touching, tapping, and scrolling. However it is typically difficult for an individual to reach this outcome on their own, and thus it is important to ask your friend to put their smartphone aside and reconnect face-to-face."
I got a little creative in a couple areas to keep it sounding natural, mainly the "squeeze time for the one on high agenda" as I didn't understand what you were trying to say there. If you have any questions about my version ask away.
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- Inglês (EUA)
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"More importantly, ask your friend to put their smartphone aside and reconnect face-to-face."
If you could provide more context before and after this sentence I could verify it sounds natural. Since using the word "hence" implies something mentioned earlier.
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"To tackle this it is necessary to put limits on time spent using a smartphone and to stay away from mindless touching, tapping, and scrolling. However it is typically difficult for an individual to reach this outcome on their own, and thus it is important to ask your friend to put their smartphone aside and reconnect face-to-face."
I got a little creative in a couple areas to keep it sounding natural, mainly the "squeeze time for the one on high agenda" as I didn't understand what you were trying to say there. If you have any questions about my version ask away.
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