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please correct my tiny translation of an IndIan meditation book for being more natural thanks in avance:
when your mind become truly tranquil and empty, thus your concept of time and space is stopped, your everything becomes me. Unity, wholeness, holiness, modesty, and love. These are the only truths, other than them, everything is all trash. This is overly simple, but I wonder how many people can understand what I am saying now. When you stop conceptualizing, you are me. otherwise, there is nobody, nothing.
please correct my tiny translation of an IndIan meditation book for being more natural thanks in avance:
when your mind become truly tranquil and empty, thus your concept of time and space is stopped, your everything becomes me. Unity, wholeness, holiness, modesty, and love. These are the only truths, other than them, everything is all trash. This is overly simple, but I wonder how many people can understand what I am saying now. When you stop conceptualizing, you are me. otherwise, there is nobody, nothing.
when your mind become truly tranquil and empty, thus your concept of time and space is stopped, your everything becomes me. Unity, wholeness, holiness, modesty, and love. These are the only truths, other than them, everything is all trash. This is overly simple, but I wonder how many people can understand what I am saying now. When you stop conceptualizing, you are me. otherwise, there is nobody, nothing.
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- Inglês (EUA)
"When your mind becomes..."
"other than them, everything else is trash.
Also I have a question. When it says "there is nobody, nothing." Is this good or bad?
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- Inglês (EUA)
"When your mind becomes..."
"other than them, everything else is trash.
Also I have a question. When it says "there is nobody, nothing." Is this good or bad?
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- Inglês (EUA)
If it's good "otherwise" is incorrect. "Otherwise" is used when giving a warning for a bad outcome.
Ex)"You have to stop conceptualizing. Otherwise, you will never be me."
Since the outcome in your translation is good "otherwise" sounds weird.
You can say "When you stop conceptualizing, you are me. After that, there is nobody, nothing.
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You're welcome :) I can't believe you're only a beginner. Good job!
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@jazzy33: yeah I'm not the bigginer but not a fluent one as well haha
can I ask whether you are 33 years old? :)
can I ask whether you are 33 years old? :)
- Inglês (EUA)
Sure. No I'm not. 3 is my favorite number. I'm 23.
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- Coreano
@jazzy33: ah really? I see. I though we are almost same age haha I'm 32 years old boy. nice to meet you. im Sun. are u a student? and have interested in learning Korean?
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- Inglês (EUA)
It's okay, I'm awake. I'm not a student but I am interested in Korean. I'm Jasmine. Nice to meet you too.
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@jazzy33: if u need and you are leisurely enough to exchange languages, shall we be language partners? I will not bother your private life; mine will be just simple and short questions. :)
this app is good but I feel answers are sometimes very.. kind of uncertain. and the alarm drives me really crazy haha
if u agree with me I would give u my Kakaotalk ID. just think about it :)
this app is good but I feel answers are sometimes very.. kind of uncertain. and the alarm drives me really crazy haha
if u agree with me I would give u my Kakaotalk ID. just think about it :)
- Inglês (EUA)
- Coreano
@jazzy33: oh great! thanks! don't worry anything I'm commonsensical, simple and sincere (not the pervert also haha)
btw are you not sleepy????
btw are you not sleepy????
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