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I will attend a full marathon on October 30th in Osaka.I was lucky because I was selected among my university by lottery.I also don't need to pay attend but if we want to run we have to pat around 100 dollars.So I have to practice and goal within time.I will get over it. soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
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You have a mistake. "We have to pay around a hundred dollars." This sounds how people speak and looks how people text. If this were formal, I would ask who "we" is since you refer to yourself as winning the lottery for the marathon.
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- Inglês (EUA)
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You have a mistake. "We have to pay around a hundred dollars." This sounds how people speak and looks how people text. If this were formal, I would ask who "we" is since you refer to yourself as winning the lottery for the marathon.
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- Inglês (EUA)
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When writing formally, there is a space between the period of a sentence and the capital letter of the next sentence.
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