Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Natuno"

A: × Natuno confessed her upbringing which she was abused by her parents who were ardent believers of the Jehova's Witnesses.
✓ Natuno confessed that in her childhood she was physically abused by her parents, who were ardent Jehovah’s Witnesses.

× Since the age of 3, she went to the Jehova's Witnesses gathering 3 times a week.
✓ From the age of three, she attended their gatherings three times a week.

× When she dozed off during a preaching, her parents took her to a restroom, and beat
✓ When she would doze off during a sermon, her parents would take her to a restroom and beat her with a belt.

× her with a belt.

× Untill she grew up, ran away home repeatedly.
✓ When she was growing up, she ran away from home repeatedly.

× She went to the police for getting their advices, but child custody center didn't protect her.
✓ She went to the police for help but the child custody center wouldn’t protect her.

A: × Natuno confessed her upbringing which she was abused by her parents who were ardent believers of the Jehova's Witnesses.
✓ Natuno revealed her upbringing, inwhich she was abused by her parents who were ardent believers of the Jehova's Witnesses.

× Since the age of 3, she went to the Jehova's Witnesses gathering 3 times a week.
✓ From the age of 3, she went to the Jehova's Witnesses gathering 3 times a week.

× When she dozed off during a preaching, her parents took her to a restroom, and beat
✓ When she dozed off during a sermon, her parents took her to a restroom, and beat

× Untill she grew up, ran away home repeatedly.
✓ Once she was older, she ran away home repeatedly.

× She went to the police for getting their advices, but child custody center didn't protect her.
✓ She went to the police for their advice, but the child custody centre didn't provide her with any protection.