Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Jourdan"

A: × Jourdan tried to convey the difference between the life of a slave and life as a free man witty and vaguely.
✓ Jourdan tried to convey the difference between the life of a slave and life as a free man vaguely but wittily.

× He knew that he could never get compensation for labour exploitation.
✓ He knew that he could never get compensated for labour exploitation.

× However, he offered the former master to compensate for the wage he couldn’t receive 32years ago.
✓ However, he offered his former master to compensate for his wage that he couldn’t receive 32 years ago.

× Also, he contrasted that past life as a slave and his current stable life.
✓ Also, he contrasted his past life as a slave with the stable life he's currently living.

× This could have the effect of reminding the former master of how vicious he was.
✓ This could remind his former master of how vicious he had been

A: × Jourdan rather than directly expressed his feelings about the ridiculous proposal he received from his former master, he portrayed it witty and vaguely.
✓ Jourdan, rather than directly expressing his feelings about the ridiculous proposal he received from his former master, portrayed them wittily and vaguely.

× By narrating past events and reminding the former master of the atrocities he had committed, it was intended to remind us of the absurdity and absurdity of the former master's proposal.
✓ By narrating past events and reminding the former master of the atrocities he had committed, it was intended to remind us of the absurdity of the former master's proposal.

× Since Jourdan was no longer a slave to his former master, he could fill the letter with accusations or bad words towards him.
✓ Since Jourdan was no longer a slave to his former master, he could have filled the letter with accusations or bad words towards him.

× However, with his witty demeanour, he saved his face gracefully and hit his former master.
✓ However, with his witty demeanour, he saved face gracefully and still managed to humiliate his former master.